nikki
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Post by nikki on Aug 11, 2008 18:43:36 GMT -5
Fuego moved with stride while his dapple gray Warmblood bod swayed. His pillars were long and stocky. He was tall and lean, around 16 hands may be a little bit under. He wasn't a typical dark. No. He loved when others suffered and died. It was almost his favorite thing. Except for the smell of blood. It could drive him mad. He was cold and shallow like most. Almost seemingly as if he had no heart. He found a dark territory it seemed suitable for him.His own dark quarters .He smirked deviously as he watched the shallow trees sway in the harsh breeze. It was a spooky looking place. Like out of a scary movie, one of the forests at night. "I Fuego,claim this land for my own, if you dare rule against me, then we shall fight for it." His vocals were deep and raspy like he had something in his throat. He stood buff as the cool breeze tangled through his mane.
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Post by manipulation on Aug 11, 2008 18:45:41 GMT -5
Once you fix the majority of the grammatical errors i will accept. thank you.
*HINTS* make sure to use full sentces, not fragments and mind use coma's when needed. And the space bar. Space bar helps.
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Post by manipulation on Aug 11, 2008 19:00:18 GMT -5
accepted. thank you for dealing with my difficultness. XP
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